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Writing About Your Career Path

Terry Chevako Bava • August 17, 2020
Many students have known from their earliest days exactly what they want to do with their lives. Perhaps their mother has always despaired of their paint-spattered clothing but delighted in their works of art, or they are always taking things apart to examine their inner workings, or they treasure their telescope and can name every star in the night sky. If they know exactly what they want to do in college, should they write their main essay about what they want to be and why? In a word…maybe.

If you have an interesting route to your career choice and can write an essay that shows that path along with multiple sides of who you are and what matters to you, why that career resonates with you, it might be a good fit. A story or series of vignettes that shows how your interest developed and what you have done to foster your interest can go far in showing a college admissions committee what you would be like as a student on their campus. The most effective essays go beyond telling people what you want to be to showing them why that’s what you want to be and how you came to that realization.

However, don’t feel that you have to have your life planned out and that your main essay has to be a roadmap for people to follow. Even if you know what you want career you want to pursue, the rest of your record might speak loudly enough to that so that you can write about a completely different topic in your main essay, or at least diversify a little.

Let’s imagine a future biology major who has a transcript full of AP science courses, membership in a medical club, awards from science bowl competitions, summers full of pre-med courses and shadowing doctors, plus a teacher who will write a recommendation letter that will probably mention her leadership in the laboratory. Does she have to write about how she comes from a family of doctors and is destined to become one herself? She could, but she could also let her record speak for itself and instead show the admissions people a completely different side of her, such as her affinity for cooking and how she connects with different people that way.

One reason that can be a good choice is that it makes you stand out as a multi-dimensional candidate. If your application is full of science and medical activities but you write about the beauty of languages and practicality of trilingualism, you are likely to shine in the sea of biology applicants. It also helps because it broadens the picture of who you are and makes your application more interesting. Many colleges and universities also have a supplemental question about why you are applying to the college and what you want to study there, and you don’t want to repeat yourself. If your main essay is unique, it gives you the freedom to be specific about your goals in a supplement without repeating yourself. Remember that even though you might write essays weeks apart, they will be read together. Don’t bore your readers or miss an opportunity to give them new information!

If you don’t know what other topic to pick and haven’t done any brainstorming exercises, do the exercises! If you really don’t want to do that, try picking the fifth or sixth item on your résumé or Common App activities list. If you have listed activities in order of their importance to you or your commitment to them, that item might be an activity that is a little different from your main, career-related activities but is still one that you care enough about that it will inspire some passionate thought and writing.

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